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I chose to write a stream of consciousness. Stream of consciousness is a method of narrative representation of "random" thoughts which follow in a freely-flowing style. Characteristics and Criteria of Stream of Consciousness [] "Such fools we all are, she thought, crossing Victoria Street. For Heaven only knows why one loves it so, how one sees it so, making it up, building it round one, tumbling it, creating it every moment afresh; but the veriest frumps, the most dejected of miseries sitting on doorsteps (drink their downfall) do the same; can't be dealt with, she felt positive, by Acts of Parliament for that very reason: they love life. In people's eyes, in the swing, tramp, trudge; in the bellow and the uproar; the carriages, motor cars, omnibuses, vans, sandwich men shuffling and swinging; brass bands; barrel organs; in the triumph and the jingle and the strange high singing of some aeroplane overhead was what she loved; life; London; this moment of June." -Virginia Woolf, //Mrs. Dalloway//
 * Focalization on inner thoughts and feelings
 * No first-person but figural narrative mode
 * The flow of thoughts is represented by means of long-winding, interconnected sentences
 * Use of informal, colloquial language
 * Denial of syntax (punctuation is neglected)
 * Grammatical and stylistic deviance

[] cheese is good. you are fat. come on lets dance. omg ur hair is fab today! to be mature or not mature is the question i get asked. mmmmm what to say and what not to say. do me now. [] //"Raising her eyebrows at the discrepancy -- that was what she was thinking, this was what she was doing -- ladling out soup -- she felt, more and more strongly, outside that eddy; or as if a shade had fallen, and, robbed of colour, she saw things truly."//

Genre 4 This is Marilyn Manson writing Stream of Consciousness I have been enrolled in the Heritage Christian School for awhile now. I have nothing good to say about this fucking place. They teach about abstinence and how we need to repent for our sins. I believe in indulgence, instead of abstinence. A man should indulge in his natural desires. Only be doing this can we be completely satisfied as a person. And enough about the seven deadly sins, God Dammit! All the sins are simply our human nature. We need these sins, to be a human being. I also fucking despise Christians. At such an early age Christians already start to appear as robots. They all believe that their interpretation of God is right. Who the fuck are they too chose. Life is one big never ending sin and repent cycle.