Reflection+Gettysburg

  Comp 1 – Writer’s Revision Sheet (what you wrote) || Revision (how it changed after feedback) || Explanation/Rule (catchy way to remember next time) || || ||
 * Original
 * Genre 1 – 1963 || Changed it to 1863 || ** Wrong date  ** ||
 * Genre 1- Not enough info. || Elaborated on many other topics not just what he felt. || There was not enough information about the war ||
 * Genre 2- To plain || Added background || Makes it look more authentic and more appealing to the eye ||
 * Genre 3- Wrote John Brown instead of John Burns || Changed them all || Make it more accurate ||
 * Genre 4- Diary entry || Hand wrote it to make it look better || Makes it look more authentic to the time period because that did not have computers
 * Genre 5- did not have job aspects || Added them || Makes it look like an actual newsletter
 * Genre 6- No title for the newspaper || Added the Gettysburg time || Makes it look like the newspapers of the time ||
 * Genre 7- Was a letter || Made it to a telegram so it would get to him quicker || Letters took way to long for that important information ||